,To whom it may concern...
My is Thanh Nguyen I'm an eleven year old, 6th grade student at David Reese. I'm writing to you about my pet hamster Melon. Six months ago my older sister bought him for me at one of your stores and just a week ago he died. I went to him one day and I noticed he was lying in the cage with his body curled up. I started to calling his name as usual, but this time , he didn't move to me I looked closer and realized the awful truth, Melon was dead. My heart dropped and I felt saddness. I didn't understand what had happened. The man at the store told me that it was a baby hamster and he should live for about two years, not six month. I took care of him just like I did my other hamster. I now know Melon was not a baby hamster. He was already old when I brought him home.
I think you should tell kids the truth when they buy pets at your store so they don't become sad if anything should happen to it. I also think someone should apologize to me. I love Melon like he was a family member and now hes gone. My sister says she would replace him I guess that would be okay, but it's the same and I still miss him.